Progress on "A Far Sun"
It was back at the end of April that I last talked about it. I was discussing how I was changing it to appeal more to a young audience, and I am happy to report my progress since that date.
I finished reading aloud to my wife up to the end where I'd chopped off the last 55K words. I got to that point a few weeks ago, and since then have starting writing, again. It took me some time to think through a few things, but eventually I figured out what I wanted to tell and where I wanted to go. So now, I'm off and running again. As I write this I'm into chapter 51 and just over 161K words. That puts me 20K words past where I made the chop, and that feels really good.
Something I've noticed is that by reading the story it's helped me write it. Now I know how to put things together better, and I don't have to make as many impromptu edits later. I still have to go back and go over my rough draft copy, but that comes together pretty quickly.
Also, I've reached the end of the second act. From this point forward my heroes will be on the offensive, and the action has ratcheted up considerably. Just within the past two chapters people have even died, and that proved to have just the impetus I needed to springboard the story through to the end.
As an aside, I've been saying I know exactly what's going to happen, even though I don't know exactly what's going to happen. I don't know, not in detail, but in terms of the major events left to occur, I know what they all are. I just don't know when these things are going to happen, or exactly what will precipitate them when the time comes. That's the fun of it--not knowing exactly what will be around the corner. I'm probably all wrong about this, but I'd like to think it makes the story more exciting, as there is some sort of 'element of surprise' evident in my prose when I twist it this way and that. Or maybe not.
I had a lot of good stuff in the part I cut out. A few good characters and some pretty good interactions. But none of that will survive into the story, now. It's too bad, but it just doesn't fit. There may be one character (or two) that I reintroduce, but other than that, I think I have all the characters I need to carry this thing through to the end.
I'm really excited, because when I read these last five chapters between Friday evening and this evening, I got a very big thumb's up from my very literate wife. She still thinks the story is really good, and even though I know she's biased, it gives me a lot of encouragement. Enough to blast out the final 40K words and call this thing done. That's 11 to 12 chapters, which means I don't have a lot of time to mess around.


